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Fled: Chapter OneFled Chapter One
Father tries so hard. I know I disappoint him, yet he stays content with me. I have no strength. I have no power. I am nothing in his eyes. I don't deserve to take his place as Chief of Ongore.

We were coming home from what seemed like an eternity of fighting. Krea hadn't backed down since we had been in their territory.  We only came back for lack of food. I didn't want my warriors to die of hunger. Father will be furious.
As I led my warriors across the mountains, I couldn’t help but think of the trouble I’d be in for coming back so soon.
“My son,” my fath Fled: Chapter One
by ~Proofread

Red Mary JanesMaybe it's in the hair. That jet black '50's pompador
perching so precariously upon your
head. I know I'd look ridiculous with
something like that.
Perhaps it's your face. Why would God make something
so flawless,
so smooth? My Neutrogena ran out yesterday.
Yeah, you have nice clothes. I wonder how you keep everything
so black. No lint or cat hair, either. Another button popped off my sweater.
Your legs are like twigs. They don't even have that little curve where your thighs are supposed to be, but Red Mary Janes
by ~Proofread

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Fri May 26, 2006, 9:38 AM

this is a new club, started by ~rastaqueen, where you can post writing and poetry in order to have it proofread!

To post prose/poetry:

Watch the club.

Note the link to your deviation.

it will be submitted to the club's deviations

and a proofreader will proofread the deviation!

also, since the deviation will have been submitted to
the club, the people watching our club will also see the work ( and you will get some exposure!

Please note me if you would like to be a proofreader!

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Current Residence: In rastaqueen's head
Interests: proofreading prose and poetry!
Favourite artist: Our proofreaders so far are: rastaqueen, kaizen-neutral, frostypeanut, and silamai.
Tools of the Trade: a brain.

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~waynemethod Feb 20, 2007, 11:15:26 PM

Is there a limit to the length of the writing to be posted here?

*lancekatre Aug 30, 2006, 2:39:06 PM

Mmm, sounds like an awful lot of fun, very practical thing you have here. I'd love to be a proofreader.

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~La-Serpentia Jun 16, 2006, 4:10:08 AM

what i have read of the comments made by the co-ordinator of this club has given me a negative image of this place. whoever the organiser is, you're unnecessarily rude/abrupt with your proofreaders.

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Days of wine and roses, days of wine and roses
All the artists flew in and all the arseholes flew out in '72

<`MinorKey> and don't drink so much that you remember having fun...

~Proofread Jun 18, 2006, 2:58:25 PM

Any examples? I don't see where I have been abrupt or rude.

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~La-Serpentia Jun 24, 2006, 2:30:47 AM

in any correspondence with your 'proofreaders'. You are very curt and uptight in speaking with them i found.

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Days of wine and roses, days of wine and roses
All the artists flew in and all the arseholes flew out in '72

<`MinorKey> and don't drink so much that you remember having fun...